Snoddy,+Jamie

toc =6/28/2011= I like your enthusiasm for debate and the Cap argument. You did a good job of extending it and explaining the alternative, but the 2NR could use more impact work. Go for weaponization or the kritik, but not both. Also, if you want to bolster the effectiveness of your case arguments, spend some time explaining the evidence and not just doing tagline extensions. Remember, you don't have to defend communism or any particular political vision with this critique. Only the absence of capitalism. Your evidence says all sorts of people have dandy ideas for how the world should be after the K. You did a fairly good job of trying to make this distinction, but Marxism is just a set of economic theories, not necessarily a concrete description of a society.

Tim

=7/1/2011= 2A: Jamie -Remember in the 2AC- case always go first and the offensive positions -You need to do line by line on the case flow- I don’t know where to flow these cards that you are randomly reading -Good jobs saying why your argument/card is better- by qualifying -You did a good job on case after I corrected you -Don’t worry about pronunciation- just go faster over those words  -I would recommend writing blocks with more diversity of arguments -On one of the Das you should make a case outweighs argument -Good sign posting